Leave Me My Thoughts
67dreaming
Just give me some sunshine
please not just the rain,
as I'm sitting here thinking
of things I could gain.
Not measured in gifts
of things from afar,
not even in diamonds,
or even a car.
Just hand me your dreams
and I'll give you mine.
Where our hearts can be shared
in a matter of time.
A bouquet of flowers
and a candy or two...
don't add up to much
to you sharing, just you.
We can wander the plains
in the backroads of life,
where happier thoughts
give us freedom from strife.
Lay me down in the grass
on that dew, flowered hill
to share all our wishes
for our hearts to fulfill.
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You do write beautiful poems like this one. I hope your dreams come true. Voted up and beautiful, Joyce
Oh so beautiful.
Afternoon Debbie! : ) I am so pleased you really liked my poem and that specific line. I am such a dreamer, I suppose...wanting things I may not have but someday hope to. But, even so...I love writing about silly daydreams of love. I don't know of very many girls who don't, do you? Thanks for the vote...'way up' too!
Hey thank you for that, writer20. It is so nice to hear. Thank you for the votes too! :D
Thank you acaetnna! : ) You write beautiful love poems too, about your husband. I have read them on numerous occassions. ;)
Your emotions are pure and beautiful just like the nature.
Thank you for such a nice compliment, Vinaya Ghimire. : )
You have beautiful words and I loved this read.
Take care and enjoy your day.
Eddy.
Wow, thank you for such a nice compliment, Eddy! : ) Enjoy your day too.
Laying down in dewey grass. Beautiful...
Aww...thanks so much, A.A.Zavala! : )
Ok-now I am really wanting to search for that special somebody. LOL What a beautiful and magical poem. You do a great job bringing your words to life. I was right here laying down in the dewey grass. I hit many buttons.
Sweet, Minnetonka Twin. Thank you for your kind thoughts on my poem. : )
A lovely poem, pure and fresh and lighthearted. Love it
Thank you Rosemay50! : ) I am glad you found it to be so and that you loved it.
...so very very lovely says this 'sly dog' and I will post this beauty and beautiful thoughts at my new FB group called Let's just talk music or cinema - because we get a lot of traffic there - and it would be a honor if you care to join us - my name is Colin Stewart at FB with the same profile photo and on my homepage is a link to the group - hope you can make it and sending you warm wishes and good thoughts from lake erie time ontario canada 1:49pm
; ) I am glad you liked this one, 'sly dog'! Thanks for the invite to FB. I will think about it, as I am a rather shy and private person. Warm wishes back, epgramman!! : )
Very lovely poem that you've written here. :)
Thank you, Stevennix2001! Good to know you liked it. : )
Deborah Brooks 3 months ago
Good Afternoon Girl talk. this is another awesome poem you have written. I really love the ending. Lay me down in the grass on that dew, flowered hill to share all our wishes or our hearts to fulfill.
Oh how we wish and pray that could be us.
Thank you for a beautiful poem
voted way up
Debbie